First Response

Carolyn- I think you have a pretty good idea of what your i-search project is going to be like, but I think it needs to be a little less broad. You might what to consider narrowing it down to a couple of bands (like four or five) and that way you could have more sub-topics on those bands and possbily have a better understanding on their affect on history. Another idea would be to use half of your bands that were not popular at all, and then compare them to bands that were very popular. That way you can compare and contrast, and find the differences of affect. One lesser comment is that your thesis statement starts lower case, and later on where the paragraph breaks it is also in lower case. Just a thought, but over all nice job.